The critique session this week went well, it was good to see how everyone was getting on. For me personally i felt i undersold myself and didn’t fully demonstrate the hard work i have done. However it was supposed to be quite informal and the method of my project meant showing actual working models would’ve been quite difficult anyway.

I had a session with my tutor directly after to get some much needed feedback on specific problems. We decided on a few fundamental tweaks. To incorporate my backdrops into most of the scenes to fill out the atmosphere. At first this seemed quite trivial, however, my flash file incorporates many graphical assets which haven’t been cleaned up properly and these are also involved in animation loops. This would prove to be one hell of a task.

I can report that i have implemented some of these changes into my opening sequence and i have also tried it out on one of many scenes that i have animated, i feel the changes have improved the look of my work drastically! Its bringing things to life even before adding any ambient sound or narration. .

I will host 3 versions of my opening sequences for you to take a look at. This will give you an idea of what changes i have made.

The file order is oldest at the top then the newest at the bottom.

VERSION 1

VERSION 2

VERSION 3